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100WC

April23

I am a tree and I am angry at people killing my friends. So evolved I grew legs and killed all the humans and were ruled the world But a human resistance rose from the grave and took back there world. The world was a mess so we moved to Mars and we made a living and Mars was a great home but then the sad grew legs and the whole thing happened again. It Happened over and over and over and over. Until we cross and Blackhole and it was served because we all passed the blackhole and died.

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  1. April 23rd, 2018 at 11:47 am      Reply libby2016 Says:

    Well written Jett.
    I love the concept of the trees getting revenge – a bit of an environmental message. Stop cutting down the trees or they might come after us!
    You have used repetition really cleverly in the last part with the “over and over and over…”.
    Make sure you reread your work. While the ideas are fantastic, some of the sentences towards the end are quite disjointed and muddled – you need to do some editing to correct this.


  2. April 29th, 2018 at 11:25 pm      Reply quinn2016 Says:

    This was a funny post how he avolved legs


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